📝 IELTS Writing Task 1

Lexical Resource & Range Exercise

🎯 Objective

To help learners improve vocabulary range, accuracy, and appropriateness in describing data. This includes:

  • Using synonyms and paraphrases
  • Applying a range of verbs and adjectives for trends
  • Avoiding repetition and basic word choices

📊 Task Description

The line graph below shows the percentage of people aged 65 and over in three countries (Japan, Sweden, USA) between 1940 and 2040.

(Assume Japan starts low, rises sharply after 2000; Sweden rises steadily; the USA rises gradually.)

📚 Step-by-Step Guide: How to Improve Lexical Resources

Understanding Lexical Resources

What is Lexical Resource? It measures your range and accuracy of vocabulary. For IELTS Task 1, this means using varied, precise, and appropriate words to describe data trends, comparisons, and patterns without repetition.

Basic (Band 4-5)

"goes up"

"a lot"

"the same"

Limited vocabulary, repetition

Good (Band 6-7)

"increases"

"significantly"

"remained stable"

Some variety, occasional repetition

Advanced (Band 8-9)

"escalated dramatically"

"witnessed substantial growth"

"exhibited remarkable stability"

Wide range, precise, natural

The 5 Key Areas for Lexical Excellence

1. 📈 Movement Verbs

Basic: go up, go down

Better: increase, decrease, rise, fall

Advanced: surge, plummet, escalate, decline

2. 📊 Degree Adverbs

Basic: a lot, a little

Better: significantly, slightly

Advanced: dramatically, marginally, substantially

3. 🎯 Precise Nouns

Basic: number, amount

Better: percentage, proportion

Advanced: proportion, share, segment

4. ⚖️ Comparison Words

Basic: more than, less than

Better: higher than, lower than

Advanced: exceeded, surpassed, lagged behind

5. 🔄 Synonyms & Paraphrases

Basic: Repetitive use of same words

Better: Some variety in vocabulary

Advanced: Natural variation, no repetition

Essential Vocabulary Bank

Basic Word Improved Alternatives Advanced Options
goes up increases, rises, grows escalates, surges, climbs steadily
goes down decreases, falls, drops plummets, declines, diminishes
stays the same remains stable, constant exhibits stability, plateaus
a lot significantly, considerably dramatically, substantially
fast rapidly, quickly swiftly, at an accelerated pace

Step-by-Step Improvement Strategy

Step 1: Identify Weak Vocabulary

Look for: repetitive words, basic adjectives/verbs, vague terms like "things," "stuff," "a lot"

Step 2: Use Precise Terminology

Replace "number" with "percentage," "proportion," or "figure" depending on context

Step 3: Vary Your Verbs

Don't use "increase" three times - use "rise," "grow," "climb" for variety

Step 4: Add Sophisticated Modifiers

Instead of "very big," use "substantial," "considerable," or "significant"

Step 5: Check for Natural Flow

Ensure your advanced vocabulary sounds natural, not forced or over-complicated

Common Lexical Mistakes to Avoid

  • Overusing basic words: "go up" appears 5 times
  • Inappropriate register: "tons of people" (too informal)
  • Incorrect collocations: "make a decrease" (should be "show a decrease")
  • Vague quantifiers: "some," "many," "a lot" without precision
  • Word form errors: "percentages increased" (should be "percentage increased")

🧩 Task: Improve Word Choice and Variety

Below is a basic student response with weak lexical resource. Click on the highlighted words to see better alternatives.

The graph shows how the percentage of people aged 65 and over goes up in Japan, Sweden, and the USA from 1940 to 2040. In 1940, Japan had the lowest number of elderly people. It stayed the same for many years, but then it went up a lot after 2000. Sweden and the USA also go up, but not as fast. By 2040, Japan has the most old people.

Progress: 0/8 words improved

✅ Improved Version with Advanced Lexical Resources

The graph illustrates how the percentage of people aged 65 and over increases in Japan, Sweden, and the USA from 1940 to 2040. In 1940, Japan had the smallest proportion of elderly people. It remained relatively stable for many years, but then it rose sharply after 2000. Sweden and the USA also experienced growth, but not as rapidly. By 2040, Japan is projected to have the highest percentage of elderly individuals.

🎯 Lexical Improvements Made:
  • ✅ Varied movement verbs: increases, rises, experienced growth
  • ✅ Precise quantifiers: smallest proportion, highest percentage
  • ✅ Sophisticated adverbs: relatively, sharply, rapidly
  • ✅ Natural paraphrasing: eliminated repetition
  • ✅ Appropriate register: formal yet accessible

📚 Complete Lexical Resource Bank

📈 Upward Movement

  • increase / rise / grow
  • climb / escalate / surge
  • advance / expand / soar
  • rocket / skyrocket / boom

📉 Downward Movement

  • decrease / fall / drop
  • decline / diminish / reduce
  • plummet / tumble / crash
  • dip / slide / slump

➡️ Stability

  • remain stable / stay constant
  • plateau / level off
  • maintain / hold steady
  • exhibit stability

🎯 Degree Adverbs

  • dramatically / significantly
  • substantially / considerably
  • slightly / marginally
  • moderately / gradually

📊 Data Nouns

  • percentage / proportion
  • figure / statistic
  • share / segment
  • ratio / fraction

⚖️ Comparison

  • exceed / surpass
  • outpace / overtake
  • lag behind / trail
  • comparable to / similar to